AirbridgeWebsite delivery report
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Our story

Ten items. All copy supplied by you was used exactly as written.

Our story as delivered

Our story as deliveredOpen full size

01
Remove the full stop from the header
Implemented
02
New Goldfields introduction copyUsed verbatim as supplied
Implemented
03
“100+ trials”
Implemented
04
“Significantly lower carbon footprint”
Implemented
05
Replace “3 product families” with “15 industrial products and growing”
Implemented
06
Remove the 1 to 4 numbering, keep the four labels
Implemented
07
New “Proven” copyUsed verbatim as supplied
Implemented
08
Remove “in the Pilbara” and use the first-of-a-kind wording
Implemented
09
Put the Nick and Sam cards on equal footingSame size, same treatment, no visual hierarchy between them
Implemented
10
Board listed in line, Oosterhof as Non-Executive Director
Implemented